Raising the narrowest part of the waist also means re-shaping the lumbar region and buttocks – there is a much more generally triangular form to this area (a very rounded triangle, mind you! :D). The current re-curve is too acute as well, needs to be less severe – moving the waist up will help in that regard. This puts the recurve of her waist (which does begin just below the ribcage) too low, and between that and the flare of the pelvis, there’s not enough area for the mass of the external oblique muscles. The overall shape is OK it’s just too elongated vertically. If you’re going to do female nudes, spend a lot of time studying them – life drawings are best, but there’s massive amounts of nude imagery on the web – it need not be “porn” – both of the glamorous variety (which it seems you’re striving for), but also the more “everyday” sort, which is a good place to learn about the differences between ideals & realities. She looks fatally anorexic, with not enough of either muscle or fat masses in the right places. My biggest critique is the general volumes of the body. Lots of good comments in this thread, and good progress.

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